托福写作正确使用人称和代词

英汉文章都广泛使用第一人称写作，而绝大多数中国人喜欢在议论文中使用第一人称复数“我们”，美国人的文章使用第一人称单数”I”和“we”的情况各半。使用“I”体现个人情感和主观意志多一些，而使用'"we”则会使文章显得更具客观性和性。即便如此，在托福写作中，我们还是不建议考生使I刊` we”a因为使用we的考生往往受政治八股影响较深，文中经常看到“We should...", "We will...”等字样，接近于官僚讲话风格。许多美国人非常不习惯，他们也许更愿意在克林顿的国情咨文中听到my daughter如何如何。对于“I".建议考生也尽可能少用，一篇文章多三处，少则可以没有。建议少川“I”的原因很简单:为了增强文章说理的力度。其实，是考生自己写的文章，自然表达的是考生自己的观点，不说“I think, I believe, I prefer, I agree”等措辞，别人也会知道这是考生的想法。

托福考试作文范例：做领导者的好处

托福考试作文题目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

托福考试作文参考分析：

讨论做leader的好处：主动，可以操纵更多的资源，获得更多;缺点：风险大;讨论做member的好处：安逸;没有风险;缺点：收获较小。做leader和member一定程度上与一个人的性格有关。另外，还要看是做什么的group。视情况而定。

托福考试作文范文：

According to my opinion, it is always better to be a leader than a follower. True leader show initiative. They take actions and they assume responsibilities. A leader makes a decision. Some followers may approve of the decision, others may complain about it. However, these followers all chose to follow, not to lead. They chose not to make a decision. That's how I am different. I am not a follower. I want to make decisions.

A good leader will not react to events, but will anticipate them. A leader will start a plan of action and then will persuade others to follow. For example, a class president at a local college may feel that the relationship between the community and the campus is not a good one. The citizens may feel that the college kids make too much noise on the street, litter public areas, and shop in other communities. A good class president will recognize that the community and the campus depend on one another. The president will ask the student body to keep noise down, help clean up the neighborhood, and work with businesses to attract students. A good leader takes the initiative.

Good leaders must be action-oriented. Having taken the initiative, they must see the job though. They have to take charge and lead the followers. They have to motivate and encourage the followers. The followers (in this example, the student body) must understand why good relations with the community are necessary. The followers must be persuaded to do something about it.

I enjoy taking the initiative, determining the direction, and being responsible for my actions. I do not want to suffer through other people's stupid decisions. If there are going to be stupid ways to do something, let them be mine. Would not you agree?

托福考试作文范例：人类行为对地球影响

托福考试作文题目：

Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

托福考试作文参考分析：

人类的行为对地球的影响，有好的，也有坏的，需要分条阐述。

托福考试作文范文：

People have learned how to turn wild natural areas to farmland, how to exploit minerals to adapt their needs, how to build roads and houses to expand their territories. People continuously improve their knowledge and develop technologies to improve their lives. It is undeniable that these activities of human beings make their lives better than ever before. Nevertheless, those activities also cause side-effects to the Earth because of pollution, deforestation, and exaggerated natural resource exploitation.

Nowadays, pollution becomes one of the most concerned problems. Because of the increasingly expanded factories, the industrialized areas, the burning of population etc, too much pollutant spills out everyday. Consequently, all of these things cause bad effect to the Earth. The purity of atmosphere is reduced seriously, the Earth is continuously warmed up, and ozone layer is holed.

Additionally, forest is asking for help in desperation. For last few decades, the forest areas have been reduced to 50 percent because of human deforestation. Green forestland of the Earth can be compared to the lungs of human. How healthy you are if your lungs are trespassed. I am sure that you will get more difficult with aspiration; as a result, your health will be affect badly. From this example, we can infer that how serious problem our Earth has to face with. I wonder how long it can endure.

Researchers show that the natural means is limited, but today, they are exploited so increasingly to adapt infinite human needs that someday, all mineral can be ended up. Because of serious pollution, alarming deforestation and progressive mineral exploitation, the ecosystem becomes unbalance. Consequently a lot natural calamities happen each year such as flood, hurricanes. A lot wild living creatures are exposed to narrow place of shelter and lacking foods. For these reasons, the Earth will become unhealthy.

In conclusion, the human beings harm the Earth. Human beings as well as their dear planet, the Earth, have been badly suffered by what caused by humans themselves. I hope that humans are soon aware of those problems so that they can have suitable policies in order to not only improve their lives but also keep and maintain the Earth fresh and green.

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