托福写作常用且常错时态问题汇总

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只要做好这几件事，托福写作不算难!

关于托福写作，其实写作很容易提分。综合写作说白了是考察听力，在平时一定要练习如何边听边记笔记，记笔记的能力在听力口语和写作都尤为重要。综合写作要尽量把多的听力细节写进去，所以听的时候不能边听边忘，阅读部分也可以适当地改写而不是一概抄写下来。

写作非常看重词语的变换，综合写作虽然不考察思想，但如果有亮点的句子或是词语搭配，都会有相应的提分。到了独立写作，在考前是多看一些题目，积累自己的idea，不用每一个都写下来，可以把相同题目进行分类，然后一起列提纲。尤其是要注意托福写作的常常出现的那几种题型，than、most等几种非常规的题型，以免在考试时乱了阵脚。

平时也要计时训练写作，一定要在20分钟内和30分钟内完成相应的字数，练习时更要注意拼写的重要性。考试的时候在草稿纸上可以非常简单地就用几个关键词写下思路，然后按照自己的建议提纲来写，千万不要慌乱

托福写作常用且常错时态问题汇总

时态有五个问题要注意的，即格式，含义，比较，统一和活用。

在实际应用中，时态的基本规律并不复杂，只要多想多用，很快就可以掌握的，至于更多的变化，也完全可以在以后的学习中逐步掌握的。而能用之后我们又会发现，其实每篇文章里时态的搭配都可以有多种方案，就像我们每个人的衣着可以有很多种搭配一样，我们时态的用法也可以有多种搭配方案，只要能符合表现文章的主题的需要，就应该说是正确的。至于哪种是最佳的方案，则各人有个人的看法，所谓仁者见仁，智者见智了。

时态(写作常用且常错)：

1.一般现在时：表示真理性，经常性，习惯性，普遍性。[在口语里常用，在叙事性文章和故事里很少用]

例句：1.The earth is smaller than the sun. [状态][真理性]

2.Tom gets up early every morning. [动作][经常性和习惯性]

3.Everybody knows him. [普遍性]

2.过去时：表示过去某一时间里发生的动作或状态。 [叙事性的文章和故事里最常用的时态]。

例句：1.Yesterday we went to the park.[动作]

2.The book was there ten minutes ago. [状态]

3.将来时：表示将来某一时间里发生的动作或状态。

例句：1.Tom will help you tomorrow. [动作]

2.We shall be here in time next time. [状态]

4.过去将来时：表示从过去某一时间看将在以后某一时间里发生的动作或状态。[注意不要跟现在联系起来]

例句：1.Ten years ago, Mary said she would finish the work in a few days. [动作]

2. Yesterday he thought you would be a good player after five years. [状态]

5.现在完成时：表示在现在之前就已经完成的动作或状态[要特别注意不包括现在]。

例句：1.We have done our homework. [动作]

2.He has been a doctor now. .[状态]

6.过去完成时: 表示在过去某时之前就已经完成的动作或状态。

例句：1.Three days ago he had already finished his homework. [动作]

2.When he was a boy, he had already been a head of the boys. [状态]

7.将来完成时：表示在将来某时之前将完成的动作或状态。

例句：1.Tomorrow morning, I will have cleaned the windows. [动作]

2.Next Sunday, he will have been a new doctor. [状态]

8.过去将来完成时:表示在过去某一时间之前本该完成的动作或状态。[一般用于虚拟语态]

例句：1.If he had worked hard enough, he would have built a new house. [动作] [实际情况是因为他不够努力，所以新房子连影子都没有]

2.If he were alive, he would have been a doctor now. .[状态][实际情况是他已经去世，所以永远成不了医生]

9.现在进行时：在现在之前开始，以后还要延续一段时间的动作。[要注意只有延续性动词可以用进行时]。

例句：Tom is reading a book.

10.过去进行时：在过去某时之前开始，以后还要延续一段时间的动作。[要注意只有延续性动词可以用进行时]。

例句：The dog was eating a bone.

11.将来进行时：在将来某时之前开始，以后还要延续一段时间的动作。[要注意只有延续性动词可以用进行时]。

例句：At ten tomorrow morning, I will be writing the letter for you.

12.过去将来进行时：从过去某时来看将再以后某时之前开始，以后还要延续一段时间的动作。[要注意只有延续性动词可以用进行时]。

例句：Jack told me that he would be working hard the next year.

13.现在完成进行时：在现在之前就已经完成并且还要延续下去的动作。[较少用]

例句：Tom has been reading this book for over ten hours.

14.过去完成进行时：在过去某时之前就已经完成并且还要延续下去的动作。{很少用}

例句：The workers had been building the railway then.

15.将来完成进行时：在将来某时之前就已经完成并且还要延续下去的动作。{很少用}

例句：They will have been making their efforts after that time.

16.过去将来完成进行时：在过去某时之前看来将来某时应该已经完成并且还要延续下去的动作。{很少用}

2017年12月17日托福独立写作解析

2017年12月17日托福独立写作题目：

Your friend is going to reduce the living expenses. Which of the following way would you recommend to your friend and why?

1. Find a roommate that can share the living expenses.

2. Buy the new technology products less frequently.

3. Shop for less expensive food to cook at home.

2017年最后一场托福考试，要写一篇关于没钱如何省钱的作文。

如果有这么一位花钱大手大脚的土豪朋友，但是又突然想成为佛系青年，不想再乱花钱，你会建议他怎样做。

写作思路解析

题目中所给三个提议，确实都是可以省钱的。找个舍友去分担生活开销，房租，水电费等等，都是可以分摊的，而且每个月房租确实是一笔蛮大的开支，不管是对于上学党还是打工仔。另外，找了舍友，有时还能一起做饭，甚至有的舍友本身厨艺就不错，如果因此导致大家经常在家吃饭，那也能省一大笔下馆子点外卖的钱，从这个角度讲，第一个提议就已经包含了第三个提议所涉及的好处。不过找舍友有时就像找男女朋友，还真不是件容易的事，如果碰到不好的，各种琐事，比如水电分摊，垃圾谁倒等都可能会引发争吵。

新的科技产品也是个烧钱的货，尤其是刚出来那会，价格肯定是不低，所以能尽量少买就少买点，毕竟以前的还能用(比如手机)。而且新出的产品，有的功能还不完善，有些甚至是噱头大于实用性。科技产品确实耗钱的同时，一个明显的事实不能忽略，那就是本身它们不像吃饭租房，并不需要每个月都花钱，所以即使买的频繁，真的算一算，也没有那么耗钱。

而至于最后一个提议，买点便宜的菜在家自己做饭，既然便宜了，省钱是肯定的。但是吃的如果太马虎，土豆白菜都是买别人剩下的，还真不能保证营养能跟上。再者，有些菜既然店家卖的便宜，那么也许是打了太多农药，变了色，不好卖才讲价，反正无法保证没问题。因为跟健康息息相关，所以还是不能太冒险。

这道题目，翔哥特地邀请目前正在长沙新航道学习的初中少年来写这道题目。他对于题目的分析还是比较到位的，不过对于论点的论证，不是非常充分，这也是

毕竟人生早已如此艰难，要是再没钱(乱花到父母都不给钱)，那就真的是要遁入空门了。

2018年05月12日托福独立写作解析+参考范文

2018年5月12日托福独立写作题目:Some people like to buy a piece of technological device as soon as it is available in the market. Other people prefer to buy it after many people have adopted it. Which do you prefer? - 对于购买电子科技设备而言，有些人喜欢在它一上市的时候就买，而有些人则喜欢等到很多人用过之后才买，你更喜欢什么时候购买呢?

写作范文1

When a new piece of technological device, usually an electronic gadget, is launched, there must be long queues of people who cannot wait to own it. On the other hand, there are patient people, who wait until the market calms down. Although passion is not necessarily undesirable, patience is more adoptable.

For one thing, if a consumer could stay calm, he or she would likely have an economical deal or even a bargain. As consumer electronics are updated so frequently that the original high price of a model can hardly remain long, it is not smart to purchase a device when it is newly available and at its peak price. After the initial thrill, many early birds regret their impulse because they know that they have overpaid. It is therefore sensible to buy the device when the price drops to a reasonable level. As for the excitement of owning a new digital gear, as long as the device is new to its owner, it does not have to be the freshly available.

Here comes the follow-up question: for how long should a consumer wait? Usually a few months — when many people have owned it. A typical example is smart phones, whose old models are replaced with new ones annually. A consumer could wait for merely a few months and own the most recent model with a moderate expense of money, saving hundreds of dollars.

中心句：Waiting is a rational decision also because consumers can be better-informed. Although it is exciting to chase the trend closely, those technological fashionistas can wind up feeling disappointed. When they purchase a newest model of tablet or a most cutting-edgy wearable item, they often have no idea or only a vague idea of how these products actually feel—the appearance, the tactility, the weight and the functionality. At the moment they open the box, any feature that is below their expectations can upset them. Contrarily, patience makes winners. It is particularly advantageous that ‘late arrivals’, who have probably learned the strengths and weaknesses of a device from the feedback of ‘early birds’, are well prepared for the item. Especially unsurprised by the drawbacks, those patient shoppers are less likely to be ripped off .

In conclusion, first, if a technological product is purchased at a supposedly lower price, it is more worth the money; second, if the decision of purchasing is based on others’ user experience as reference, it may be more reasonable. For these two reasons as the minimum, it is better to buy a technological device when the initial heat is gone than when the tide is high.

Comment

1. 词句使用：

a) 句法结构丰富且自然：没有过度堆砌语法结构而造成阅读困难、冗余、油腻，作为范文可以帮助学生建立正确的导向，防止一味追求复杂结构。

b) 词汇地道且自然：并没有追求长难罕见词，但大量使用了学生普遍认识但未必会用的词汇，恰如其分，没有明显的中文痕迹。

2. 谋篇布局：没有明显的模板痕迹，文脉流畅。

2018年7月1日托福独立写作范文 | 当今媒体报道的新闻和过去相比缺少了准确性?

2018年7月1日托福独立写作题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Sometimes people think that nowadays the media (TV, newspapers, and the Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problems than it brings benefits to the public.

参考范文[position: agree]

The media dominate the way people get informed. [引入话题的第一句话的信息量不要大，不要给读者制造信息压力，形式上可能是个短句] However, not all people believe what they see, read or hear from the media. [顺势引入话题的立意核心] As a matter of fact, many peoplequestion the credibility of media coverage, and the skepticism, which is justifiable, particularly prevails today. [然后简单展开] In fairness, inaccurate information is however not necessarily as deleterious as is thought [语法现象：省略].

First, 中心句：not to demonize the media [语法现象：不定式作目的状语], journalists may nottamper with information but omit the step of fact check before they publish a story.[中心句不宜信息太多太详细] Since [语法现象：原因状语从句] news is time-sensitive, particularly in this age when people can hardly long maintain their interest in a matter, the media have to rush before their headlines are late, and they can hardly be meticulous in a hurry. Although those mistakes are honest, they are still attributed to a lack of concern about the truth. By contrast, in the past decades, when audience would wait patiently, reporters were able to write with precision of details [语法现象：介词短语作方式状语] and they did.

中心句：Although it is unfair to deny the integrity of all the media, it is fair to maintain some doubt, as there must be media crews that are insincere. Admittedly, a newspaper or a TV station, as a business, needs to make sales to survive; however, nowadays, some media are too profit-driven to emphasize the truthfulness of their coverage. The worst case is that [语法现象：表语从句] some journalists, seeing their job as a lucrative career rather than an honest profession, fabricate stories that sell and are only glad to see that circulation or viewership increases and that the business rakes in [rake in] money. [句型现象：长句] This situation was less likely among past generations of journalists, who understood what true journalism is. The media used to have the integrity and would never bend their work ethics—informing people of but only the truth — even though they would lose financial gains.

In terms of the effects, inaccurate information is indeed misleading, and if it ismisinformation, it betrays the public. However, under some circumstances, accuracy is counterproductive, and the media purposefully alter information, under the administration’s instructions, to stabilize a society. For example, the media may selectively report details of natural disasters in order to curtail the spread of negative emotions, which do not help.

In conclusion, nowadays, the media, including TV, newspapers, and the Internet, care less about the accuracy of news than in the past. They either make honest mistakes or lie. However, it is unfair to see only the downside.