怎样写托福作文才能拿高分

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托福写作如何才能拿到高分呢?我们都知道托福写作的评分标准分为good,fair和limited三个等级,下面小编就和大家分享怎样写托福作文才能拿高分,来欣赏一下吧。

怎样写托福作文才能拿高分

一.从评分角度看托福作文如何拿到25+

一般情况下,托福作文拿到25分以上算是高分。那么托福写作怎么样才能拿到这么高的分数呢?我们从评分角度来分析一下。我们都知道托福写作的的评分是是0-5分,评分等级分为good,fair和limited三个等级。托福写作分数的评判中,独立写作和综合写作所占比重相同,但是分数的具体算法却并不是取平均分(ETS有自己的评分标准,在此不做详述)。如果大家想要稳妥地拿到25分以上,那么托福综合写作和独立写作都要拿到good,两个good的得分是25-30,所以最低分数也在25分以上。如果一篇写作得了fair也是有可能拿到25分以上,一个fair和一个good的分数区间是21-27分,只是并不稳妥。所以如果想保证25+,必须拿到两个good。

二. 平时如何练习托福写作

1. 独立和综合同等对待

我们在上文中说过,托福独立写作和综合写作的比重是一样的,所以大家在备考中应该对综合写作和独立写作一视同仁,不能区别对待。很多同学备考的时候都有种错觉,觉得独立写作是托福写作中的大作文,需要认真对待,综合写作是小作文,可以少花些时间备考,这种想法是不对的,两个版块都需认真对待。

2. 听力和听写练习(综合写作题型)

在这里强调听力和听写练习主要是针对托福综合写作。托福综合写作需要大家根据阅读和听力材料中的内容总结归纳成一篇文章,所以对于大家的听力能力有较高的要求。有的同学觉得托福听力只要没有问题,综合写作中的听力肯定也没问题,但事实上托福综合写作中的听力对大家的要求更高一些。听力版块的考试中都是客观题,只要听懂内容选出正确答案即可,但是综合写作却需要大家记录的更加详细方便写文章用。所以,小站君建议大家在平时练习中多练综合写作听写。

3. 写作技巧

关于写作技巧,其实不需要赘述太多,大家在网上也都看到过很多关于如何提高托福写作的技巧。关于独立写作只强调三点:审题,提纲和时间把握。独立写作考试中不要急着写文章,申请题目,列好提纲再动笔,把握好考试时间,最后要留出检查时间。综合写作除了上文中强调的听写练习外,还要注意组织自己的答题套路。综合写作的写作时间只有20分钟,快速归纳总结,把握好写作时间是重中之重,另外写完以后也要记得检查。

托福写作语料库积累:关于书籍电影音乐

托福写作语料库

关于music的类型Type/genre: rock & roll, R&B, reggae, country, Jazz, electronic, folklore(民谣), classical music;

伟大音乐家的名字Great Musicians:Beethoven, Bach, Mozart

流行音乐人Pop singers: Eminem, Beyonce, Jay Z. Taylor Swift, Bruno Mars, Rihana.

电影的类型Types of movies:thriller(惊悚片), suspense(悬疑片), comedy, action, documentary, science fiction, romance(爱情片), Animation(动画片), horror (恐怖片)

有名的电影导演Director(后面附有该导演的著名电影名字):

Peter Jackson: Return of the King

Steven Speilberg: Jurassic Park (侏罗纪公园)

James Cameron: Avatar(阿凡达), Titanic

Christopher Nolan: the Batman, the Dark Night;

著名演员Actors and actresses: Jackie Chen, Bruce Lee, Brad Pitt, Angelina Julie, Leonardo DiCaprio

就电影、音乐和书籍的作用和效果而言,小编总结了一下几个共同特点;所以当考生看到任何跟电影、音乐和书籍有关的题目时都可以巧妙的应用以下理由。

缓解压力: ease/release + my pressure/stress/tension/depression from both my life and study;

让生活和学习变得更有效率、充实:improve /enhance/ increase + learning/study efficiency/productivity of the day;

精神焕发:refresh myself, revitalize/revive my mood;

激起情感和想象力:bring about different kinds of emotions; stir/stimulate my imagination; (注解:听音乐、看悬疑电影的时候)

句子:

小说、电影的线索很迷人:

The storyline/plot is very attractive/engaging/intriguing;

看电影、读小说的时候身临其境忘乎所以:

When I read this masterpiece/watch this movie, I find time irrelevant and I totally forget about the time. I tune everything out around me and am so attracted in the storyline and I feel tied up to the character in the novel/movie.

没有什么可以阻止我看完这部小说或电影:

I feel like the characters in the novel/movie connect to me so much that nothing could hold me back from reading/watching it until I finish the novel/movie.

托福写作语料库积累:关于成功因素托福写作语料库

关于激励Motivation

词组:light up, push oneself, be destructive to s/th, tap the potential, miss out;

没有自我激励的人生就像一个只死鱼一样,那种人生不值得活;人应该不停的点燃内心的火苗把自己推向成功。没有自我激励的话,就是郁郁寡欢、无所事事;更糟糕的是没有办法开发自己的潜力,并措施成功的机会。

Without motivation we're like a dead fish in the water, that kind of life is not worth living. we should constantly light up our internal fire and push ourselves harder to achieve our goals. While the lack of motivation is destructive to oneself, and one will feel depressed, and have a pretty low esteem. To make matter worse, one is not be able to tap the full potential within oneself, thus he or she would miss out the chance to be successful.

关于珍惜“今天”

你不能改变过去,但你可以改变未来。我们应该明白,事情不总是他们期望的方式。当他们犯错误时,他们关注的解决方案,而不是遗憾。俗话说,昨天是历史,明天是神秘的,但是今天是一个礼物,这就是为什么我们称之为礼物。

You can't change the past but you can change the future. We should understand that things don t always work out the way we expect. When we make mistakes, we ought to focus on solutions, not on regrets. As the saying goes, yesterday is history, tomorrow is mystery, but today is a gift, that's why we call it present.

关于艺术家的“成功”

并不是天分造就伟大的艺术家,是努力,坚持,毅力,决心和毅力。并不是每一个伟大的艺术家可以在五岁的时候能做出很好的画作。

It isn't talent that makes great artists, it's hard work, persistence, will power, determination, and fortitude. Not every great artist can draw nice pictures by the age of five.

成功的艺术家不是以天分支撑的,那只是不付出努力的借口。还有其他更重要的因素如能否够寻找社会关系;与同行和导师而不是天赋更重要。

Successful artists aren't underpinned by talent, it is an excuse not to put in the effort that is needed to be a successful artist. There are other more important factors like, to be able to seek out social connections, and build on them. Connecting with peers and mentors is more important than being talented.

必须上大学才能成功吗

Advanced education provides you with the tools you need to be successful in your future career. Not only can you acquire specific knowledge in a particular filed, like economics, physics, and biology, and stuff, you can also get practical experience in relevant areas, like psychological counseling, physical therapy, and even nursing.

高等教育为您提你未来职业生涯成功需要的工具。不仅可以获得特定的知识在一个特定的领域,如经济学、物理学、生物学等等,你也可以在相关领域获得实际经验,如心理咨询,物理治疗,甚至护理。

生意人要不要随和?

能够建立社会和职业关系网,并扩大他们的能力是企业家成功的关键因素,为了实现这个目标,我们需要随和,这样使破冰更容易。

The ability to build up social and professional connections and expand them is the key factor to be a successful business person, and in order to achieve that, one needs to be easygoing, cuz that makes ice breaking much more easier.


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