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详解托福写作考试中常见的3大类病句

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详解托福写作考试中常见的3大类病句

  新托福写作的评分标准比较高,在语言上的考察点也是非常高,所以新托福考试在语言上一定要引起极度重视,很多考生对于托福写作一筹莫展,那么我们怎么完成一篇优秀的文章呢?其中词汇的重要性我们必须重视,包括遣词和造句两个方面。下面学习啦小编为大家分析下三大类型的病句。

  详解托福写作考试中常见的3大类病句

  1、破碎句

  所谓破碎句,就是句子不完整,通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式,如分词),或者是从句单独成句。

  破碎句:She singing alone.(无谓语,singing是现在分词)

  正确句:She is singing alone.

  破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句)

  正确句:He did not come because he was sick.

  2、接连句

  所谓接连据,就是两个句子直接连在一起,既未使用连词,也未使用正确的标点符号。

  接连句:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

  正确句一:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

  正确句二:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

  3、句子连接不正确

  所谓句子连接不正确,就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接,这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。

  不正确句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

  正确句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

  托福写作高分必备过渡词

  大家都想一次和托福说拜拜,那么要怎么做才能拿到高分成绩呢?当然少不了平时的练习和技巧运用啦!学习啦小编为大家带来“托福写作高分必备过渡词”,希望对大家有所帮助!

  过渡词在托福写作中可以分成两类,分别表示时间和空间。

  1.表示时间的

  next 接下来

  one afternoon 一天下午

  one day 有一天

  one morning 一天早晨

  recently 最近

  since then 自从那时起

  soon 不久

  Soon/shortly after ……之后不久

  suddenly=all of a sudden 突然

  then 然后

  to begin/start with=in the first place 首先、第一点

  af first 起初

  after a while 一会儿

  after that 那以后

  after that 那以后

  after/before dark 天黑后/前

  afterward 后来

  as a young man 当…… 是个年轻人的时候

  as early as 早……的时候

  as soon as 一……就……

  at last 终于

  at the age of… 在……岁的时候

  before, the other day 几天前

  earlier, until now 直到现在

  early in the morning 大清早

  eventually 最终

  finally 最后

  immediately 立即、马上

  in no time 不一会儿

  in the end 最后

  lately 近来

  later 后来

  meanwhile=in the meantime=at the same time 在此期间、同时

  2.表示空间的

  above 在上方

  across 在……的另一边

  against 靠着、抵着

  around 在周围

  at the back of 在后面

  at the bottom of 在底部

  near to 在……附近

  next to 与……相邻

  on the edge of 在……的边上

  on the right/left 在右/左边

  on top of 在……的顶部

  opposite to 与……相对

  over 垂直在上

  to the right/left 朝右/左

  under 垂直在下

  before 在前

  behind 在后

  below 在下方

  close to 靠近

  further on 再往前

  in front of 在前面

  in the front of 在前面

  in the middle of 在中间

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