I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法 2. 陈述自己的理由 3.提出至少2条建议。
范文： Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
On the New Year's Eve, our family gets together, myparents made the big dinner, we ate dinner at aboutfive o'clock, we talked so happily.
After finishing the dinner, my sister and I were soexcited, because we planned to see the firework.
In my hometown, people can play the firework as they want, people play all kinds of fireworkevery year, it is so beautiful.
When the time was about 9 o'clock, I heard the voice, then I looked at the sky, the darknesswas lighted up by the firework, I saw many different pictures of firework, all were beautiful.
I couldn't blink my eyes, I was afraid of missing the beautiful moment.
I love firework's night.
Studying Abroad 出国留学
1. 情感孤独，思乡。2. 生活学习费用高。
注意：1)第一句已为你写好，不计入总词数。 2)词数100 左右。
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.________________________
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign countries to study. Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are many advantages in attending schools abroad. First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. Second, we can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries. Third, we can learn foreign languages more quickly.
However, there are some disadvantages. Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience. Besides, being far away from their home country, they may feel lonely and homesick. Of course the costs are much.
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。
It is a common phenomenon thatpeople,including the elderly people as well as some young people, will gather in the dancing square late in the evening due to the fact that people’s physical and mental life develop rapidly.
When it comes to square dance, it is universally acknowledged thatit makes a tremendous difference to people’s life. For instance, not only dancing women promote people’s relationship but also it makes contributions to people’s health. However, dancing has some disadvantages of its own despite its advantages. When dancing, the dancing women play loudmusic unconsciously, which gives rise to dissatisfaction.
Personally speaking, I am definitely infavor of such behaviors. By the way, I do hope the dancing women can try their best to regulate the volume of music. Only in this case can we create a harmonious community together.